Mike had got a new guitar and had decided to go into a guitar competition. When it was his turn, Jimmy who was 7 year old started playing with his guitar. He then messed up all of the different keys so when Mike went onto the stage to play, all of his songs were messed up. It was completely out of tune! He said to Jimmy that it was all his fault and had to repay him. So Jimmy gave him a fake $100 bill. Man he is so smart Jimmy, I’ll take him for my brothers any day. :D
Thursday, February 14, 2019
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ReplyDeleteI like your writing but why does it have a D at the end from Brendan
ReplyDeletethis is the best thing i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!
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