Once upon a time Jenny and Betty were walking with their Mum to go to the shops. Her Mum had a appointment for a job so Jenny had to wait outside with her big sister. After a while Jenny was bored so she sat down and played with her teddy. Her Mum came back down and said that she got the job so they went across the road and had some lunch and then went back home but when they got home Jenny realised that she had left her teddy behind so they had to drive all the way back and then grab the teddy what a mission.
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