Thursday, February 14, 2019

100WC - Week #20 - Kate

“I better get up before I’m late for my movie shoot,”said Ella so she put on her active gear and started to walk. It was already such a hot day in Hollywood so she stopped to take a water break, then she sat for awhile regaining her breath when she heard some penguins.  Then she saw a pigeon that looked a bit weird and  it was completely out of tune, it sounded quite robotic. Ella then threw a rock at it and it smashed, Ella was right it was a robot and it had a camera inside, it was spying on her, but who?


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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2019 at 1:50 PM

    that is soooooo good Kate but what happens next?

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2019 at 1:50 PM

    that is soooooo good Kate but what happens next?

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2019 at 1:53 PM

    Hi Kate I really liked how you used a robot instead of a musical piece of writing.Think about the capital I's.

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2019 at 1:56 PM

    NOTHING WRONG WITH IT BUT I KNEED A PART 2

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