I’ve just got back from the party , it was so fun. I’m saying hi to my mum and dad and my two siblings, of course there not happy I’m back but whatever. So I’m looking for my cat’s .I look in every room in my house and I can’t find them anywhere .Oh ,there they are in the cupboard and what are they into now ,the vinegar I mean the are pretty stupid. who even likes vinegar by itself .Who know’s how they got into that. Well it looks like the vinegar was too sharp there faces are all screwed up they are so funny.
Monday, February 25, 2019
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that is so cool Ruby
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