Monday, February 11, 2019
100WC - Week #20 - Natasha
One day when my family was hiking I started to whistle, then my dad started to whistle and then my mum started to whistle. But my sister didn’t whistle she just kept on walking. “Why aren’t you whistling” I asked her. my sister answered “I can not whistle." “Just try I know you can whistle come on whistle” I told her before I started to whistle. Then my sister started to whistle but it was completely out of tune. I asked my sister “Ziva please stop whistling." “I told you I can’t whistle” she said in a sassy voice. Then we all stopped whistling...
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