Saturday, February 23, 2019

100WC Week #21 Lachlan W

In the city by a traffic light there are some cars going past and on a path way there’s a teddy. A little girl who lost it when she was walking with her Mum and dropped it. She didn't now  she lost it she put it in her mums bag and it fell out and her mum didn't see it sad that she really lost her bear and really wants it back to her so she can hug it again. She is wanting her mum to go back and get it again so she can be happy again.

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  1. Margaret FryeFebruary 24, 2019 at 3:25 AM

    A sad story that we hope will have a happy ending with the little girl and her mum going back to find the teddy bear.

    I enjoyed reading your story. It touched my heart.

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