Thursday, February 21, 2019

100WC - week#21 - Genevieve

Look at this bear, it's been left on the sidewalk by a little girl because she had to get to school.  She was sad and can’t wait to get back to it, but sadly she forgot about it and it was taken by a storm and landed in a field.  Many years pass, this little girl has grandchildren now! The world has changed she takes he grandkids for a walk in the field not knowing about the bear, she found it and started to cry, but out of nowhere, ALIENS JUMPED OUT OF THE BEAR AND ATTACKED THEM! more aliens jumped out of this tiny bear and they proceeded to take over the earth.



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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2019 at 12:00 PM

    hi gen this is ruby I loved your story maybe next time less aliens and check your spelling. from ruby

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    1. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2019 at 12:02 PM

      so more aliens and check my spelling?

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2019 at 12:03 PM

    hey Gen your story is really crazy when the aliens come out from the teddy bear but i still like it

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2019 at 12:05 PM

    the spelling was bit /he took her grand kids/ great job though
    from ruby

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2019 at 5:13 PM

    wow loved the ailean part

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2019 at 8:31 AM

    Hello, Genevieve. I like the concept of aliens,but you need to check your spelling.
    Your friend, Aden E

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