Archie is doing the musical in riverdale it is his best song yet until the finale. Archie is doing a solo when the music stops betty cooper aka betty blossom screams then Archie turns around there was the black hood. The black hood has Veronica with a gun up to her head “please don't hurt her I'll do anything just don’t hurt her”. “Sing then all of you”the black hood said, so Cheryl and Betty and Archie start to sing but it was completely out of tune.
Tuesday, February 12, 2019
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hi issy
ReplyDeletethat was really good i cant wait for some more of your storys