Today was our first concert at ll o’clock we had a band practice. At some stage one of the drum sticks broke because Billy hit it too hard. After a while my guitar string broke but luckily I brought a spare one. Then at 3 o’clock It was the concert probably at about 2 hours In when we all thought everything was good It all turned bad. My guitar was out of tune the drum stick broke the piano legs collapsed then everyone left the concert it was a disaster and luckily it was only just a dream.
Thursday, February 14, 2019
loowc week20 LIAM
Today was our first concert at ll o’clock we had a band practice. At some stage one of the drum sticks broke because Billy hit it too hard. After a while my guitar string broke but luckily I brought a spare one. Then at 3 o’clock It was the concert probably at about 2 hours In when we all thought everything was good It all turned bad. My guitar was out of tune the drum stick broke the piano legs collapsed then everyone left the concert it was a disaster and luckily it was only just a dream.
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