Sunday, November 17, 2019
100 WC #11 the angry child - Ruby
Splash the gloomy air blew against my face “get up your on the bus this morning,” my mum tries to yell but she can’t because she has a dead tooth I roll over “ come on get dressed,” mum snickers “what do you want for breakfast ,”she yelled from down the hall “toast with jam,” she examples “No ,he said,”I like MARMITE on my toast, not sloppy old jam, who do you think I am a rat,``''excuse me young man,’ my mother said ,I know I’m in a lot of trouble the first thing I do is run. bye?
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