Mike and Tom's mother had found a lost black kitten.
While she went to put up missing cat posters,
Mike thought that they should name the kitten instead of calling it ‘The Kitten.
“Hey, Tom let's call the kitten Ripper or Destroyer.”
"Maybe something nicer like Marmite since she is black.”
Mike shouts out, “that's a stupid name.” Tom looks up at Mike.
“No,” he said, “I like Marmite.”
When their mother came home she decided to make it Marmite
because Mike's ideas were too violent.
The family soon got a brown dog and called it toast since they BFF’s.
While she went to put up missing cat posters,
Mike thought that they should name the kitten instead of calling it ‘The Kitten.
“Hey, Tom let's call the kitten Ripper or Destroyer.”
"Maybe something nicer like Marmite since she is black.”
Mike shouts out, “that's a stupid name.” Tom looks up at Mike.
“No,” he said, “I like Marmite.”
When their mother came home she decided to make it Marmite
because Mike's ideas were too violent.
The family soon got a brown dog and called it toast since they BFF’s.
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