Wednesday, November 13, 2019

100WC Week #10 - Caitlyn


It wasn’t me .
 Walking  in  the house. I see that there is blood everywhere and  people all over the floor .“Bang” 3 pots come crashing down ,I keep walking around the house writing stuff down for the police until they get here.

I have seen 5 dead bodies well I think they are dead? I see alcohol everywhere ,there must of been a party or something  the music is going and I hear people talking ,down the stairs I go coming to a stop and pulling the gun out of my pocket should  I shoot or run it’s time to….


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  1. AnonymousNovember 17, 2019 at 1:40 PM

    I really liked the way you used descriptive words and the mystery at the end. by your best friend ruby 👍😊

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