Sunday, November 17, 2019
100WC - Week #11 - Laine
Hey mate what you doing over there you look like you are up to something. And when people are up to something it does not look good, tell me what you have got in your hand right now tell me. ̈ ̈No ̈ he said,̈I like marmite.¨I hate Marmite just to let you know ok. I don't need to know that but ok but like how do you like it it is just looks so weird and taste so weird just how do you like it.but to the case is that the only thing you had in your hand.
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To Laine
ReplyDeleteI really like your story it the end how you were acting like you were a detective tell me what you want to be when your older.
By Liam