Me, Alexis
and my Dad were gonna go camping, we start packing.
I got a
bit nervous when we were getting ready I was worried that if it gets windy the
tent will fall down. I started thinking to myself “ahh its fine yeah nothing
will happen.”
It’s time
to go to sleep so we hop in and go to bed, “zzz” Dad snores.
I get to
sleep in the end and it feels good to go to sleep but then I wake up from a bad
dream. I look outside the tent and from a distance.
I
see a RED dot moving from the sky. I get really scared.
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