Sunday, November 17, 2019

Unfortunate marmite events 100WC Week #11 Mitchell brown

There was darkness and then gooey substance like tar surrounded  the country, it was vegemite as a factory was swallowed whole by vegemite, a Sanitarium marmite logo bubbled up then a Vegemite man said  ̈only vegemite now ̈ as he retorted that sentence over and over  the man wakes up.  An earthquake Jolts and recoiled to the bouncing movements of  tectonic plates clashing. He glances over to the Marmite factory it gone, at that exact time he feels a sharp push against his chest rebarb has pierced him, ¨No ̈ he said  ̈ I like marmite. ̈


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