̈ ̈Boys time to wake up said Mum ̈
¨OK we both say tired ̈
So we get up and go get breakfast my friend John says.
̈can I please have Vegemite ̈
̈ ̈Sure sweety mum says like a weirdo ̈ do you want some butter with that.
̈ ̈U mm yes please exclaimed John ̈
So while the toast was in the toaster the boys get changed when we hear that noise that the toaster make we out to make our toast.
̈John hears the marmite I say ̈
¨I said i wanted Vegemite shouted John ̈
Mum comes in the room saying ̈everything ok she says ̈
… ̈No,̈ he said,̈̈I like marmite
Hi Liam it was really detail but not fully detailed it could use a bit more deatail but other than that it was a good story.
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