… “No,” he said, “I like marmite.”…
One Day I was at home and I went to go and get some Marmite and then my Brother saw Me getting it out of the cupboard. Then they yelled Leena can I please have some then I said ok so then I gave him some.
Then the next Day Mum went to the supermarket and got some marmite for all of us to eat and then mum went to the supermarket and got peanut butter instead. Then my brother said No I like Marmite.
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