It wasn’t me who cause it
We painted the zoo !
We walk in the front gate and we here a violin playing .
We go to the elephant part and see that they are so happy .
Then we go to the lizards and watch them change colour .
They go purple then red then green and blue.
Sps Psps a monkey just bursted poop everywhere .
It wasn't me who caused it …
Running to the toilet finding out that they are locked
The Lock is slowly turning and it opens i run in but the door on me
What an awful day .
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