Halloween
is here …..
It is a
dark and spooky silent night all I hear is bats swooping over me I go up-to the
first trick or treating door hoping I
don’t get a big fright from the people who are giving me candy there were to
pumpkins that were just sitting there looking very suspicious .
They kept
on staring at me one of them had like a ramp eyes and the other had
triangles there was a yellow and an orange one the orange one spoke first what
type of candy would you like ah I scream candy was pouring out of the mouth
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