Monday, May 4, 2020
100WC- Week #31 - Joe
I think it's time to go to the beach, I said. Wait… It's a beautiful Sunrise. It's like I'm swimming in a pool of marrsmollows . Well I could go for a swim? Nah. wow the sunrise is Shining so bright? Actually, I will sit under this tree. This tree is old but it's cool! Yea I should! Oh wow That's so cool I like this! (10 MINUTES LATER). Wow That sunrise was really great! Wait.. I just realised.. I didnt get eny sleep! Who cares. Sunrise was awesome. I have to do that again! Im am soo tired though. Great!
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