Sunday, May 24, 2020

100wc - week 35 - Carla



The river looks like it is very cold and it looks very beautiful with the big rocks sitting in the river. With the trees hanging over the river and all of the plants on the side of the river. The hills in the backround look beautiful because they have snow on the top and some hills dont have snow which it cool. The dog looks like it is looking at a bird or a leaf falling down from a tree because it is Autumn and all  the leafs are turning into a different colour like red, orange, and yellow  leafs
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  1. Janet Team 100WCJune 5, 2020 at 9:36 AM

    You have responded so well to this picture prompt, Carla. You have not missed anything! I particularly like the way you tell us what the season is and what makes the hill in the picture so beautiful. I also like the way you tell you reader what the dog is thinking about. It really beings the whole thing to life.

    Janet Team 100WC

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