Wow! This place is beautiful!” I say to my sister. It was Sunday afternoon, and my sister had taken me to a beautiful lake. “Woof!” There was also a puppy there! It was the best place I had ever been. There were tall brown trees with no leaves, leaning over the beautiful dark blue lake. There were clumps of rocks sitting in the lake, the water flowed calmly. The dog was standing underneath a tree, on a rock, looking over at the lake.
“Wow…” I repeated, “This place is amazing!” I sit down as the soft wind flowed onto my face.
Well done Mia. You've written a very descriptive piece this week. I enjoyed reading your work. I think your last line is lovely and would be a great opener for the next part of the story.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great writing.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin, Ireland