‘’ Oh, little cutie” I stopped in the middle of the street.There was a brown box with a baby racoon
in it. The baby racoon (which I secretly named Tommy) was chomping on a green leaf.
I decided to take him home.When we got to my house I took him to a little chair on the deck.
I sat down a put the box on the concrete.I pointed to the sky, “Look at the sunset Tommy” I turned
down to see only concrete, something was up and I was determined to find out
who or what took Tommy.
in it. The baby racoon (which I secretly named Tommy) was chomping on a green leaf.
I decided to take him home.When we got to my house I took him to a little chair on the deck.
I sat down a put the box on the concrete.I pointed to the sky, “Look at the sunset Tommy” I turned
down to see only concrete, something was up and I was determined to find out
who or what took Tommy.
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