Monday, May 4, 2020

100WC-Week #32-Alex

Finally I had made it away from her, I thought. She was a demon or was it a he, I don't know as long as I get away from it. I had blood leaking down my arm.
Drip drip drip. ¨ It's cold in here¨. I muttered as puffs of white air then… I was dragged back from my coller, then the mystery person took me away, ...we disappeared into the night… then surprisingly flip over and tackle the mystery person and I think I should do something horrible to him ...but should I really do this?... then I leave.

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 4, 2020 at 2:50 PM

    Hi Alex. Great story I like how you did..I muttered as puffs of white air then. Keep up the good work. From Joe

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  2. AnonymousMay 4, 2020 at 5:11 PM

    That was a very good story Alex
    From Charlie.

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