“What was that?” I scream, almost jumping into my friends arms.
“I HAVE NO IDEA!!!” Screamed my best friend Olivia. We stared at the dark mysterious forest. “Do we dare go in?”
“Yes we should!” I tell Olivia. We start to walk into the forest, then I stopped dead in my tracks. I had heard the weird noise again. “Did you here that?” I asked Olivia worried.
“This time I did! I think it was a scream!” Olivia said. “We should get out of here!” I and Olivia spun around, just as the deafening screams echoed through the cold night...
“I HAVE NO IDEA!!!” Screamed my best friend Olivia. We stared at the dark mysterious forest. “Do we dare go in?”
“Yes we should!” I tell Olivia. We start to walk into the forest, then I stopped dead in my tracks. I had heard the weird noise again. “Did you here that?” I asked Olivia worried.
“This time I did! I think it was a scream!” Olivia said. “We should get out of here!” I and Olivia spun around, just as the deafening screams echoed through the cold night...
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