Racoon!
The sky was clear tonight. A leaf fell on my windo-.
πββπΈπββ πββπΈπββ πββπΈπββ goes something outside my window.
I am going to INVESTIGATE!. I said in my head like an idiot. BANG!. Goes the chair as i walk into is.
“Please don’t wake up, please don’t wake up” I say to myself. I look through the ranchlighter, its the box. I open the door as quietly as i could so i would not scare this creature (and my parents) .
I tiptoed out outside on the cold concrete. I reach the box. I slightly open it…
“Ahhhh!” I scream “RACOON!”
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