As we disappeared into the night we found an old house on the hill. My friend said
the last one there is the rotten egg. I won your the rotten egg. I don't care truth or dare my friend
asked me I said dare. Hmm I know I dare you to knock on the door My Friend said . ok fine but
should I really do this? Yeh my friend yelled. I shouldn't do it, this is wrong. I am going home what
my friend yelled. No I am not doing the dare ok I yelled back she said ok goodbye.
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