Wednesday, May 20, 2020
100WC - week #34 - Ella
As I walk outside I hear something whistling. As i look up i see a box falling down, so i move out the way and the box hits the ground. There was a leaf on the box .So I opened it and it was a little chair and then I heard the whistling . It was another box that landed and it had a leaf like the other box .So i opened the box and there was a baby racoon in the box .And it was so cute and fluffy and it was sleeping. I was so happy and surprised yay.
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The baby racoon sounds so cute! I wonder where the boxes came from? Lucky none of them hit you, especially the one with the chair in it (even if it was a little chair!).
ReplyDeleteI liked the details that you included about the baby racoon. I could just imagine it curled up and sleeping.
Thank you!
Michelle, Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia