“Where am I?” I shouted
“Guys she's awake!” Someone replied “Are you ok?”
“Ya I’m fine, but where am I!” I Asked
“Oh we don’t know….” A girl said “But what's your name I'm Alisa!”
“I’m Nathan!” Replied a boy
“Oh…. I’m lexi… What do you mean when you say you don’t know?” I asked
“We don’t know where we are, we go kidnaped…” Alisa Said
“What’s gonna happen now?” I replied
“We don’t know…” Nathan said in a low voice.
After years we became famous assassins.
This was my last mission….
…The deafening screams echoed through the cold night…
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