We were all cozy sleeping in our beds when the siren went off and a loud speaker said
“WARNING LOCKDOWN WAR OCCURRING”
Mum woke up in a panic, she woke me up and the siren went off again
“WARNING LOCKDOWN WAR OCCURRING”
I got up and shot down Linkins ' room. I was in tears. “Linkin Linkin wake up” I yelled. He didn't wake up because he always slept like a log. Linkin finally woke up and the siren went again
“WARNING LOCKDOWN WAS OCCURRING”
We all started to pack our stuff then we hoped in the car and drove. There were gunshots and sirens blasting all around us. Good thing we took the cat because the cat would have been dead. Then we disappeared into the night.
“WARNING LOCKDOWN WAR OCCURRING”
Mum woke up in a panic, she woke me up and the siren went off again
“WARNING LOCKDOWN WAR OCCURRING”
I got up and shot down Linkins ' room. I was in tears. “Linkin Linkin wake up” I yelled. He didn't wake up because he always slept like a log. Linkin finally woke up and the siren went again
“WARNING LOCKDOWN WAS OCCURRING”
We all started to pack our stuff then we hoped in the car and drove. There were gunshots and sirens blasting all around us. Good thing we took the cat because the cat would have been dead. Then we disappeared into the night.
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