“Ruff, ruff”
“Calm down molly, and be careful.” I wanna stay far away because if an alligator comes, the wont stop.
STOMP. Who is that???.
“ARRrrRrrGGgggggHHHhhhhHhhhh” I scream.
I stumble and fall in the water. Alligators surrounding us.
Rope around my legs, so tight, it hurts. Since my hands are still free I try to pull off the mask.
“ DAD” “IS THAT YOU?”
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