Thursday, March 7, 2019

100WC - Genevieve - Week#23

There was a man named Jim, He was fixing up his house, he had to work on his roof so he grabbed his red ladder, put it up on the pavement and got to work. Afterwhile he noticed something….. Shiny? Near him he looked a bit closer and it was a pile of gold coins! He was trying to be as careful as he possibly could be reached for them remembering about the lake that was next to his house next thing he knew he was sinking in the lake and couldn’t do anything about it.
The Weird, Weird End






By -

1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMarch 14, 2019 at 12:59 PM

    I like that you say the weird weird end
    but i think you need to add some full stops but the commars are good

    ReplyDelete

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)
  • 100WC - Week #26 - Kate
    I was in Sydney on my yearly visit.  When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment.  When something pulled me bac...
  • 100 WC Week #33 by Zak
    One day there was a  spiky fruit up in the tree, there was two big spiky fruits.  I wondered “What is in that spiky fruit? “Maybe there...
  • 100WC Week #29 - All of Room 4's Posts
    Our first time writing for 100WC This weeks prompt words are... shouted     crimson   misty frantically   grave ...