Sunday, March 17, 2019

100WC- Week #25-Brooke




“Holiday time!” I shouted as I woke up.

“Yay!” I heard my brother scream.

“Pack your bags.” I heard my Mum shout.

Then the next minute we were in the car, "I wonder what the holiday house is going to look like.” I heard my brother say.  I looked out of the window, when we were close to the house.  I then saw this bulky looking house stop right in front of me.

“Is this the house.” my brother whispered to me.

“Let’s hope it looks better on the inside.” I whispered back.
My dad opened the door, I padded inside cautiously, then stared at the kitchen.

“Candy bar” my brother said hopefully.

This was not the holiday house I was hoping for.




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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMarch 25, 2019 at 8:04 AM

    Hello Brooke, I like this story because of how you described the house, but you need to work on your grammar and writing. Your friend, Aden

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