Brooke and her friend Kate were at a fair one day and decided to do the Escape the room challenge, they thought it would be quite fun and a good way to waste time. When they entered the immediately saw a red mark on the wall that said, ¨it's better dark,¨ so Brooke turned off the light and saw a hidden message that said,¨ sinking,¨what could that mean said Brooke as they were sinking into pavement. When they had finished sinking they found some coins and put them in a vending machine and found a key in the coke can, they climbed up the ladder and escaped.
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