The cookie
tin was empty. What a surprise! I knew my
brother had a midnight feast I could hear him walking quietly down the hallway,
I’m surprised Mum and Dad didn’t hear him.
I stormed
into his room.
“You had a
midnight feast” I said angrily.
“No I was
totally asleep, didn’t you hear me snoring.” he said innocently.
“Oh just
give it up.” I shouted back.
“No
seriously, it must have been someone else.” he said back angrily.
“Okay” I
said as I walked out of the room. I
looked at my kitten suspicious, then suddenly realised she had biscuit crumbs
around her mouth.
“Oh Misty,
you cheeky little kitten.” I said as I patted her.
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