A long time ago there was a pirate who had been searching the world for just this one treasure chest. Inside it wasn’t just treasure, but there was also many more treasure maps to lead him to more treasure! That was what he wanted at that moment.
He travelled for many months, until one day he came across an island he’s never seen before but it was in spot he visited a week ago? He was extremely confused so he went to travel it, he walked to a shady area of it and saw something shiny sticking out of the sand, he quickly dug it up and there it was, Empty. What a surprise!
Saturday, March 16, 2019
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I really liked your story about the pirate it was funny!
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