We were going on a holiday today we were going to Auckland i kept seeing red shops and red ladders so we asked if we could use it and it had just started sinking into the ground, we saw a coin pop up on the pavement it was really unusual so we grabbed a different one and started painting the beach house. After it looked amazing it was a nice light brown with a write roof. Everyone would walk past and say
“like the color house it looks awesome”
“How did you do that”
We would get so many questions and i would reply
“Thanks a lot we done it”
“ Thanks”
It got really tiring so we went back to home and had a nice quiet sleep.
“like the color house it looks awesome”
“How did you do that”
We would get so many questions and i would reply
“Thanks a lot we done it”
“ Thanks”
It got really tiring so we went back to home and had a nice quiet sleep.
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