¨ Mum I don't want to eat the
yucky sandwich ,there gross ¨ I say disgusted
Well mum says your going to
have to eat them ,because thats all I,ve got¨ she says angrily
¨Can I atleast get a sharp
and pointy knife so I can scrape the vegemite off the bread so I
just have cheese ¨I said red faced
No she says you can just have
it like that ¨ she said
¨I was so crossed that I
just chucked it in the bin .¨
Mum was really depressed that she chased me around the house
what a catastrophe .
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