Monday, March 4, 2019

100WC - Week #23 - Caitlyn

One day Suzzy and Emily were playing . they were very bored and then Suzzy came up with an Idea. So she went and told Emily that they could get the red ladder so they could climb on the roof and see what there was, but Emily didn,t want to. The pavement was still wet from when they were filling in the concrete  that was missing so the ladder got stuck but they didn't know and they accidently stood in it to so they got stuck on the roof ,but lucky there were coins and they made a wish and so they got down safely .
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  1. AnonymousMarch 6, 2019 at 3:02 PM

    good word on the story its had a lot of time in it

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