Monday, March 18, 2019

100WC - Week #25 - Abbie



I´m walking through Hogwarts, very scared, just thinking that one of the ghosts are going to come out.  My friend Biankha is with me.  We hear someone coming so we hide behind the candy bar but it is only Harry Potter so we come out.  But then Voldemort comes with Slytherin and he has made Ron and Hermione follow him.  We hide again.  Harry Potter distracts him so we can gap it.  
We gap it into Dumbledore’s office.  He looks at us very weirdly but then he finally speaks and whispers “Where is Voldemort?” 
“Fighting Harry Potter” me and Biankha cired. 
Dumbledore goes out in a flash we follow but lose him. We finally find the entrance and we leave.
“Wow that was scary.”   
I whooped huffing and puffing we run home we tell my Mum what happened. “It was so cool” we announced.



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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMarch 28, 2019 at 8:34 AM

    Wow, Abbie! Your story was very describtive. I am a huge Harry Potter fan.
    Keep up the good work!
    Allison

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