I was sinking, sinking into the pavement of cause i don’t know that yet because I was still throwing coins into the fountain, one by one they to where sinking “MEOW’ cried a kitten i stop, in a tree on the other side of the fountain sitting on the highest branch stood a smokey grey kitten. I rush over… only then discovering I was sinking, I panic “help, help” I cried, “someone anyone” just then a small red leaf landed gently on the cement and my feet immediately hit the ground and I rush over to the nearest house and grab their ladder and place it against the tree. “I’ve got ya” I whisper and I placed the little ball of fluff on the ground.
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