CRAZY BETTY
Hi my name is Betty and I hate eating my own lunch. Mum always says I have to eat or I’ll starve of hunger but that's why I eat grass so I don’t starve she just thinks I do.
One day she said she had enough so she made me eat my lunch otherwise no tablet for the rest of the month. I thought that isn't fair but I guess I have to eat my lunch if I want my tablet for the rest of the month . So now it’s lunch time at school and I’m freaking out but I have to eat it now so here I go yum yum yum but really I mean yuck yuck yuck so now I’m at home mum checks my lunch box. Empty. What a surprise!
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