Wednesday, March 6, 2019

100WC - Week #23 - Laine

I was walking down the road and I tripped over a stick and my coins went into the pavement. And they were sinking  I did not get them back.So I just went to the bank and got more money but in nots.So I look like a high roller and a rich person  so next i went to my house and there was a ladder and it was red and i said that’s weird. Why is that here  so I threw it out and went inside I went in the pool it was cold but nice.after that I had a shower.
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  1. AnonymousMarch 11, 2019 at 8:18 AM

    I really liked the piece becuase it made sense to me, but I had a question, what happened before you were walking? Did you have coins before? Nice piece.
    From Mohammad.

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