“It's time
to go” Dad shouted waiting in the car for us.
“Okay” we all said. We all hopped in the car and then we went to
our hotel.
“How long will it be?” Alena said concerned.
“It will be about 2 hours” Dad says happily.
“Noooooo”Alena mumbles.
“Shame” I say happily I've
got my phone.
“Hey Caitlyn?”
“What?”
“No phones on this trip to the hotel”
“Damn.”
“We are here” Dad yells.
“Yay let's go have a look”
“Okay, but be good”
“Wow there is a candy bar” I say excitedly to Alena. Wait where is Alena? Oh it looks like she has
already found it.
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