Today was my birthday. I only got one present which was a surprise I normally I get like a hundred presents. I couldn’t open it right now because my Mum told me I have to wait for family. Two hours later my family arrives then I can open it. I opened It and I got the biggest shock in world history, the box was empty. What a surprise! I was the saddest kid alive, I was an inch away from crying but I’m grateful for having my family over. But then my Mum said "Darling it was just a prank, you have 37 presents downstairs."
"Yahhh" I shouted and then my sad tears turned into happy tears.
Wednesday, March 13, 2019
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