Thursday, May 24, 2018

100 WC week #32 BY Lucian

Our class was going for an exercise before we played a game of cricket. 
I was too distracted by my friends laughing and chatting over our teacher who was telling us instructions. I talked to my friends as well but then I heard my teacher yell out GO!
I saw everyone run, so I started to as well.
I stayed behind so that I knew what was going on.
 Everyone stopped and then started doing star jumps.
I wish I took my glasses today because I didn’t know what was going on, everyone laughed at me. “But I didn’t understand the instructions.” I said.

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 29, 2018 at 8:21 AM

    Hi Lucian
    Your writing this week made me wonder if it's really because you didn't understand or because you didn't listen to your instructions. I do hope you didn't get into trouble for this.
    Miss T Team 100wc

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  2. AnonymousMay 29, 2018 at 5:12 PM

    Hi Lucian
    i really like your topic because it was very unique and it was a good idea next time maybe maybe add some speech marks on the word GO
    By Keira

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  3. AnonymousMay 31, 2018 at 4:01 PM

    Hello Lucian.
    This is a great use of the prompt. I can just visualise you casually chatting to your mates, then wondering what exactly you were supposed to be doing and I applaud you lagging a little behind so you could follow the actions of the others.
    And the lesson from all this is ....... focus on the instructions. It's a life skill!
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Plymouth, NZ

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  4. AnonymousAugust 12, 2018 at 4:15 PM

    Hi luchian i like your criket story and i like it how you said that you where playing criket and i love how you said that the techer was yelling at you

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