“Ring, ring.” There goes the phone. It’s Bobo. “I CAN’T COME but I am sending you something very important” said Bobo. What is it? I said. The phone hung up. I wonder what it will be hmmm?
THE NEXT DAY……
“When did it arrive” I said to Mum.
“What arrived” said Mum.
“It’s from Bobo to me, it’s that important thing he said he was sending me.”
”Are you going to open it or what” said Mum.
“Okay, here i go.
Marissa
I really liked the way you ended because it left me wanted to read more from you. To improve your writing you could try reading it over in your mind before you post it.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the part when at the end it is like a mystery that gives you the feeling that you want to know what happens next, Good job.
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