The sky was grey and the ground was dark grey misty, Where was I? I shouted...no response I shouted again. Suddenly appeared a lady or was it my mother? She was frantically searching around and above the desk in front of her. Her breath grew louder and louder until, Bang. A loud shot sound and crimson liquid fell from her back, I walked towards her, One step two step until it faded away, and appeared a grave I walked closer to it It said, ‘R.I.P Mum’ I woke up it was all a nightmare, but was true. Lucian
Thursday, May 10, 2018
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I like the way you said the was grey and It was dark and misty night
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