Class100
¨Ok class 100 let's come to the mat¨shouted Mrs Horan.
All of them come down to the mat expect for one the one who never listens and that one's name is michael. everyone calls him Mike when Mrs Horan said ¨come down to the mat mike¨ he did not answer. so one said ¨come down mike¨his name was Mark,and everyone shouted¨COME DOWN MIKE!!!!!!¨
So he finally came down and Mrs Horan was talking and giving insurinons and Mike just did not listen so he when the teacher saw him and said “what are you doing” “drawing”answered Mike
“I didn't understand the instructions Mrs.”
By Keira
Friday, May 25, 2018
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i like how you made everyone yell at mike
ReplyDeleteI like how you added Mrs horan in your writing
ReplyDeletenext time you write don´t be so mean and say that michael because its mean.
ReplyDeletei like how you made everyone yell at mike
i like your story it makes me amagen mrs horan saying that
ReplyDeletenext time just read it to your self out loud
issy d