Have you ever heard of a bunny horn? Hahaha if you said yes then you are lying to me because I made it up. It is a bunny with a horn and it poops rainbows. I wish they were alive and hopping all over the world. If they were real I think they would live in New Zealand and Australia in a dark cave with heaps of butterflies and would eat fruit and vegetables and are so cuddly to people and other animals and any one could have on as a pet.
Yay!
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